My Writing

Hi and welcome back to my blog I will be showing you my writing. HERE IT IS.

WALT develop a story to entertain the reader

Text form: Narrative

Success Criteria

• Use the Writing Process (Get Ready, Craft, Revising, Editing, Sharing)
• Structure your narrative through your plan
• Begins with orientation (setting and main character)
• Paint a picture with words (descriptive words and actions)
• Paragraphs (Orientation / Events x3 / Resolution - Ending)
• My writing goal: Spelling

               Beach Mystery

BANG!! the car door shut.... A nice family hopped out of the car and started to walk along the beach. Step by step they got closer to the boat. As they reached the boat they all

climbed in one by one.  Lusey is a 6 year old girl with light blue eyes and wavy long blond hair. Her favourite outfit is a blue short t’shirt, black leggings, blue sneakers and purple socks she also has purple stud earrings. So Lusey climbs out of the boat to have a swim

But following her was….

Her big sister Erica who is 11 years old with light blue eyes, wavy long blond and brown hair which is worn out. Her favourite outfit is a purple short t shirt with dark blue leggings,blue socks and purple sneakers.

They went for a swim. Then when they got back to shore they quickly got changed into their clothes while their parents were talking.

Lusey ran off along the beach and went exploring in the bush as normal. Her sister raced after her to try and stop her from getting lost.

Erica lost track of herself and started to follow Lusey. They slowly climbed up a small hill when they got to the top they were surrounded by bush they struggled through the bush.

When they finally got through the bush Erica realised something they were lost.

They tried to come out of the bush. Finally they managed to come out but their dad’s car was  not there.

Lusey burst into tears she said ‘where has mummy and daddy gone’? Erica replied

‘I don’t know but we will find our way to them’.

They went back into the bush they found a tree Erica said ‘ we will camp here for the night’.

The next morning was a beautiful day the birds were chirping the sea was nice and calm.

They kept on searching for their parents and for sticks.

At last they found a huge bunch of sticks so that they can light a fire Erica learnt to light a fire at school for kids health and safety company.

When they were half way down to the beach they found an old Macdonald's bag with chips and a burger .Lusey said ‘ you can have the burger Erica and I will have the chip’s if that is O.K’ ‘ sure lets just hope the it taste better than it looks said Erica yeah I’m with you on that one said Lusey.

When they got to the beach Erica made a fire and after that they heated up there food. It was almost the afternoon a helicopter travelled over them. they jumped around so that  the helicopter could see them.The helicopter noticed them and took them to the side of the beach where the road was. The Pilot asked Erica what their phone number is ,she said 8728626 is that all asked the Pilot yes replied Ercia. An hour later Lusey and Erica’s mum and dad arrived  to pick them up Lusey and Erica were overwhelmed so was their parents by the look of it after all the hugging and kissing they went home and lived happily ever after.THE END.

My Maths

    This week we have been learning in our maths to get really fast at our 5 timetable so that we can answer                really fast and get use to not using our hands anymore. These are the one's that we have been doing.
 This is it in order.                 

5 x 1 =5    We use the timetable master to help us with our time table's, but the timetable master does not put 5 x 2 =10          it in order so that you can be asked a question, that is like 5 x 8 =40 instead of saying
5 x 3 =15                                       5   10   15   20   25  30   35   40        

5 x 4 =20                                                that is skip counting
5 x 5 =25                              

5 x 6 =30                         This week on the 16 of October Monday I had my Maths test                             5 x 7 =35      
5 x 8 =40                          When I was fished my maths test we Skype my mum because..........   

5 x 8 =40                                               I MOVED UP TO STAGE 5B

5 x 9 =45                   At the beginning of the year I was only 4b then in the middle of the year I was 5a  
5 x 10=50                                                  Now I am 5B!!!  

5 x 11=55          All so when I was little and started maths I HATED MATHS because all the questions
5 x 12=60                       where so hard.  Maths was the part of the day that I did not like
                                         but when I moved up to Mrs Love I started to LOVE maths
                                                    so much now it is my favorite subject to do.

                                    This is how to skip count if you do not know the answer.
                                5      10      15      20     25      30      35      40      45      50      55      60

10 x 1=10                            We are all so learning our 10 timetables here they are.
10 x 2=20                                      This is how we learn our ten timetables      
10 x 3=30            
10 x 4=40              10 x 1 is 10 because you just a 0 to the 1 so it will be 10 here is anther one
10 x 5=50        10 x 2 is 20 because you add a 0 to the end of the 2 so it will make 20.  
10 x 6=60                                               Here is a harder one                        
10 x 7=70                    10 x 10 is 100 because you just add 0 again it is that simple.
10 x 8=80
10 x 9=90
10 x 10=100

                                        We are also learning our two timetables here they are
2 x 1=2
2 x 2=4
2 x 3=6
2 x 4=8
2 x 5=10
2 x 6=12
2 x 7=14
2 x 8=16
2 x 9=18
2 x 10=20









    

My art

HI and welcome back today I am selling my art 

                         You would probably want a ........2017 calendar right? 

                                                  Here is a close up on my art
            
                              DON'T FORGET IT IS ONLY $9.99 

                    And this art will shine on down to you with the moon. 

Also this night and day art will cost $9.99 and that is all it will cost. There are some other items that you can have like cards (pack of 8) only cost $12, Diaries =$15 and notepads also $12.

                                              

                             

Synchronized swimming

Hi and welcome back today I will be showing how much I know about synchronized swimming



In synchronized swimming you  really need to be as flexible as possibly is you ant you will struggle with it to hold your breath for that long. You will need to do 25 butterfly and 25 underwater and when you do it also you will need to be very strong and be gentile too. When you want to start it you will need to start off with swimming and then synchronized.


And that is it for this blog. Hope you like it.        

Learning buddies

Hi and welcome back to my blog post,yes it has be a very long time since I have made a blog, but this blog it very kind. I will like to do a blog post about my learning buddies there names are called Mich,Paris Rain and lets start of with Mich,Mich mostly gets the group have to get together on the mat when we are told to, Paris makes really funny jock's, Rain helps the group if they are stuck and I keep everyone on track and all so me too so at learning task time we all help each of us and all so help to get stuff on the tracing sheet and the boys love to talk abut boy things and Rain and me like to talk but not all the time in learning task time I like to work on my art for my candler to make it really cool and that my parents will like to bey it and it will be but on the wall. Mitch is normally on his computer and Paris is coloring in his poster and Rain likes to do her calendar and I like to do my calendar too our group get along very well.

Passion project

This my passion project. It is about world war two and  what they did there. I know some of the things because my dad was training with the army. It was a lot of time to do it but I got there.

Passion Projects Reflection

Please answer all of the following questions

Describe your passion project. What was your learning in it? What were you trying to produce?

My learning was getting to research what really happened  in world war two and getting learn what day it happened and ended also getting to learn what they slept in these dens  in the ground.I was trying to make a man in the middle of the poster holding a gun and some little drawings around it and some facts that go with it drawings .My passion projects is about world war two and it has on it what we ate and what they ate and where they slept and where they hunted and how they got to the war with the bout.

How far did you get with your passion project? What would have helped you to get further?I have finished it   

What was the most challenging part of your passion project? Finding out all of what they did.

Did you follow your plan well? Why or why not? I did follow my plan well.

Which learning muscles did you use the most while you were working on your passion project? How did you use each one? I use my managing distractions and absorption.

Which learning muscles did you find difficult to stretch during passion project time?noticing.

If you were allowed to pick a new passion project, what would you choose and why? A kitten one because it will be a bit harder but this one was enough

What was your favourite part of passion projects? Drawing the big picture of the man.

My favorite thing about Rimu

My favorite thing in Rimu is that we learn lot and lots of things and the teachers are really nice and kind. They help you when you need it. In Rimu, we have a lot of fun and cool learning tasks and everyone has a big heart and I think that the new learning suits everyone. Also in this hub we make a lot of friends in a lot of ways. We have our learning muscles. My good learning muscle is my managing distractions muscle and the one that I need to work on is my absorption muscle.